Finished Animation!

Changing the Storyboard.

After beginning my animation I decided that I wasn't happy with the story, and decided to change elements of my story board. 
I decided to keep the electricity idea, but to give my animation more of a narrative I wanted to show a change in technology. That's why I decided to use cogs at the beginning and then transform them into the sparks and circuit boards to show a change.

Initial cog drawings:

New Storyboard Development:

 Cogs and Backgrounds to add to my animation: 
I think using hand-drawn techniques will make these elements contrast the clean lines of the 'electricity' section of my animation.

Starting My Animation

Ideas for my animation: 
Images of circuit boards and sparks.

Creating the spark using photoshop and after effects:
 


Animating the circuit board:

Workshops

I Can Animate

In this workshop we used lego to create a short stop motion film. I enjoyed this workshop however I don't think it would work for my own idea. 

After Effects

Getting to grips with After Effects is difficult, but I think it will allow me to create my animation the way I want it to look. 

Here is the result of one of the workshops:

What next?

I have downloaded the trial of After Effects so I can start experimenting with the way I want all the different elements to look. 

After having these workshops I have started to realise just how much work this is going to be - so I need to start experimenting with my circuit board and spark animation ideas.

Storyboard

First Storyboard Draft:

Key Frames/ Timings

Initial planning of animation:
(I know it looks rough and sketchy - but I know what it means!)

 After figuring out the 'story', and making each section fit with my music I think i'm ready to create my first storyboard draft.

Sketches

Here are a few sketches of the ideas i had for my animation - 

I decided to focus more on circuit boards than the way electricity moves - because this could have more of a narrative. But I will still think about the jagged shapes from the videos of electricity when creating the 'spark'.

Electricity

After looking at the mood board I created, I have decided to focus on 'Electricity'.
To start I decided to just put down some of my ideas on paper: 

The main idea I came up with was looking at the way electricity moves, since I think this would work with my music.

To look at how electricity travels I went to youtube to see if there were any videos.

I think this spiky, jagged movement might work with my music. 

I could also look at circuit boards etc.

I think the next thing I need to do is come up with a narrative.. does this electricity lead to anything happening? ...

Animation Research

There are lots of different types of animation, and although I don't have a direction for my own yet I thought it would be a good idea to look at other peoples to get an idea of what's possible :)

Inspiration

I looked at images related to my words to spark some ideas for my animation. 

Mind Map

I decided to look at 4 words in particular:

• Metallic
• Electricity
• Static
• Industry

I mind mapped these words to hopefully give me some more ideas for my animation.

Initial Thoughts.

I have been finding it really hard to start this project, because I really don't like the track I have been given. But when I sat down and listened to it I managed to think of three words:

• Metallic
• Electricity
• Static

I then decided it might be good to ask other peoples opinions of the track, and their responses were interesting:

• Noise
• Electricity
• Rubbish
• Industry
• Pollution

I plan to explore these words further, and hopefully this might give me more direction for my animation.

Print To Pixel

Brief: We have been allocated a piece of music, from which we have to make a 20-30 second animation based on our emotional responses. 

This is my piece of music:

It was released in 2002 by Autechre, and the video was made by Alex Rutterford (a british graphic designer)

To inform the direction my animation will go in I need to think of 3 words that the music makes me think of and explore these further. 

Finally Finished!

Although I'm happy to have finished my design, I am not 100% happy with it. I feel like it looks more like a prototype than a polished piece of packaging. 

There are a lot of things I would change: 

Having printed the image onto the net before laser cutting,

Having all parts of the net in one piece instead of having to stick certain parts together, 

Looking more at size (working harder on making it smaller),

Being more careful with my laser cut type (as these bent),

However, it's not all bad. I am still happy with the concept, and I just wish I had more time to go back and make improvements. 

But here it is:

Inside my packaging

After finishing the exterior of my packaging I decided to look at the inside. 
One of my key pieces of information was that I liked using charcoal so I decided to work in this way, but I also felt my design needed some colour- so I looked at using chalk as well to make it more visually interesting (and to show that I don't just like black and white)

This is my original drawing:

I wanted it to look cartoon-ish so I drew it in a sketchy style not being too precious with the lines, but the colours didn't look very vibrant, so I edited this on photoshop, printed it and used it within my packaging.

More Laser Cutting

After putting together my net I decided that the front cover needed something as it looked very plain, so I decided to do more experimentation with etching. Last time I etched the 'page' photo I did it on a small scale so it was hard to read. But this time I made it larger and I think it looked good as you could read the words. I decided to use this in my final package. 

I then looked at adding the logo to the front:

After looking at the size of the 'page' photo and the placement of the logo I have decided to use the bottom right image. 

No more laser cutting, yay!

Laser Cutter

Using the laser cutter is stressful. 

The first problem I encountered was the type. Because my image was not very high quality and pixilated, I struggled to get the lines. So it took 2 hours to create the lines for the text. 

It was also very slow to etch the lines, so it started to drive me insane by the end. However, I did get the nets cut, as well as the type (despite them being fragile). 

The box fit together, and the type fit inside (although on this example the words are broken)

I also looked at size, and tried creating a really small box. However, the letters were too small for the laser to cut so it was not successful. 

I then looked at creating a large box, the letters worked, butI preferred the smaller idea.

I also tried different types of paper, but I decided that the slightly marbled white paper looked the best. 

I looked at etching - both with an image of a folded over book and my logo, and I tried small testers of each (in my sketchbook)

I didn't like the effect of the etched book because they didn't really look like words, they just looked like squiggles. 

I did however decide to etch my logo onto the side of my box.

Now that I have cut out the nets, I just need to complete the illustrative portion of my packaging. 

Paper

I have bought lots of different types of paper to try out on the laser cutter to see what works best :)

Too Much Type?

Because of my final design being a book, I think that my design has gone down a very typographic route. But this isn't the only area of design I like and I don't think it shows 'me as a designer', so I have decided to still use the type that I created, but only have 2 layers of words instead of 4, and do some sort of illustrative image behind them. This will act as more of my 'key pieces of information'.
I will still use the laser cutter for my nets and for the type, but I want to include drawings as well. 

Hand Drawn Type

I decided to create my own type, and after narrowing it down to two ideas, I scanned them in to see what they would look like digitally. 

I think that these designs look a bit messy, but as they are being cut out I think they may look effective. 
I then decided to look at the flatter/ longer type and ignore the 'loopy' idea. 

At this point I realised that for my design I needed a black outline (that the laser cutter would cut) and a white centre, which would remain. 

I added a black outline and filled the letters white.I will try and cut these shapes on the laser cutter soon. 

Nets

I started by sketching a basic idea of my box shape.

Next I drew out a more accurate net and recorded the measurements to put into illustrator.

I then put it into illustrator.

I will add my own type to these nets and then cut these using the laser cutter.

Logo!

I chose this logo out of all of my original sketches because I liked the way the letters went together, and how they created an interesting shape.
I used the colours, shapes and lettering shape because I wanted the logo to look delicate to go with the style of the rest of the package. 
I feel the little hearts are a bit too girly, and the black would contrast too much with my mostly white design. 

The logo I have chosen to use is the last one, because I like the colours, and none of the lettering is obscured (like the similar design before it).

Hopefully it will look good on my packaging!

Typographic Artists

http://www.moonsaildesign.com/typography/inspiring-typographic-artists/

I looked at some different typographic artists to give me a few ideas about different styles I might want to use for my own work. 
A lot of these artists' work would not work for my own package, but some of it has given me ideas about how I could make my typography more interesting. 

The differences in type could link to the different words, or I could use one style for all of the words to create uniformity. I could possibly also incorporate etching (like the piece by Jessica Hische) 

These are just a few images that I particularly liked, and could link to my own work (package and logo)

Laser Cutter

After having our laser cutter inductions I am now considering using it for my own package. Creating this bottle shape was actually pretty easy and I think that it might help make the type for my 'pages' look more professional. I could draw my own type, scan it in and then put it into illustrator to cut out precisely. 

Packaging, Logo and General Things.

Packaging

For my package I looked at my audience - book publishers- and decided to come up with a few ideas based around that by creating a package based around books and typography. 

I drew a few ideas in my sketchbook and have chosen one to pursue involving a box containing different layers of type. I will design my own type and possibly look at colour. The "words can fly" poster had white type with colour elsewhere. This may be an interesting way to look at colour for my package.

Next I will look at drawing out nets and creating small prototypes to see how the package would work. 

Logo

During the logo workshop we looked at creating a logo out of our initials using pre existing type. I think this created interesting designs, but I don't think they fit with the fluid nature of the type I want to use. I will look at combining the type I use for my 'pages' with the type for the logo to tie them together. 

General Things

A problem with my idea could be that the 'pages' may be fragile. To tackle this I will look at the type of paper I use and the amount of paper I cut away. I will do tests to see how strong they will be, however if they are within a box then they may not have to be too strong as they will be protected. 

~ Next: Start looking at type, nets, and how all the elements will fit together. Also look at the logo and how this will link and where it will be placed. 

Thinking about logos

As a starting point for my logo I decided to look at the logos of my audience (book publishers)

 
 


These logo designs all fit the type if book that the publishers mainly sell (for example puffin books are for children). And all of these logos look professional, however I think I want my logo to have more personality, while still looking professional.  

More Paper Engineering

Richard Sweeney

Combination of sharp angles and curves. Lack of colours- emphasising the shapes? 

Peter Callesen 

Complex and intricate 3d shapes from small amounts of paper. 

Jason Jagel

Colourful modern design - many focal points and interesting shapes. Not realistic.

Jen Stark

Combination of white and colourful paper. Lots if sharp angles and symmetry. 

Words Can Fly

(Kyosuke Nishada, Brian Li and Dominic Liu)

Focus on the birds (colourful), words blend into the background while still seeming important (3d).